This. This right here is perfection. No NTR, no ugly bastard, no rape or mind break, and it's Tifa and Cloud. Plus the art's pretty solid. That's good shit right there.
Update: All the girls with lines have voices now! This is fantastic news!Darn we almost have all the girls voiced. Still, as of writing this, just the last two girls (not the last two pages mind you) are without voices. here's hoping we get that in the future.
This is better than the original story