Woah mama, awright lemme dish out some loveable constructive criticism baybeh. First off honeh, when it's dialogue ya sound like you're reading, You need to play your character, Ryuko my honeh is an energetic girl and when the girl speaks her intonations are sharp but wen you moan oolala my Johnny Willy went BRAVO.
It's clear you got talent and it takes time to develop like these gunz *Flexes*
The Art was Okay
The Story was Okay
The Sex Scenes were arousing
The VA was Good
Final Verdict:
Reading alone is 5/10
Slideshow with audio is 8/10
I liked how well the audio came out. The VA was also pretty good. I would recommend a listen. But hey, that’s just my biased opinion.
It's clear you got talent and it takes time to develop like these gunz *Flexes*